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CONSTRUCTING THE PARAGRAPH

 

2. TOPICS AND COMMENTS

Tutorial


Dr. Elizabeth Hanson-Smith, Computers for Education

Professor Emeritus, CSU, Sacramento

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Topics & Comments 2



 
paragraph shape


Let's look at topic sentences in more detail.
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  animated topic
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animated comment
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 topic and comment
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 cats make nicer pets than dogs
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death penality
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library
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paragraph shape
 

   The TOPIC announces what the paragraph will be about.

   The COMMENT controls the way that the main idea is developed and elaborated.
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For example:

driving a car
 


     This paragraph will give reasons why driving must be learned by experience. It might have short examples or narratives for support.
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Another example:

nation's capitol
 

      This paragraph will describe various buildings and features of the capitol that please and impress.
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Another example:

roles in marriage
 


     This paragraph will give examples of roles within marriage and how they are determined by gender. It will offer examples from several different societies.
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paragraph shape
 


  In sum, the paragraph should not introduce new ideas that are not included in the topic and comment. The comment controls all the ideas in the paragraph.

As you read other's paragraphs, see if you can
predict the content from the topic and comment. This
will help you read faster and remember more.

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